After working on my cover (which I still haven’t finalized), I thought I would take a stab at writing the sales copy. Here is my first attempt. I’m pretty happy with it, but I would love to hear what you think.
The witness angel Pinsleep is an outcast among his kind. He grieves the loss of Adam and Eve, while his brothers and sisters witness human stories on earth.
When a modern day couple discovers the Garden of Eden, Pinsleep chances upon a hidden epic. Humans have discovered a way to change their destinies and hide from God’s wrath.
To understand the far reaching consequences of the trespass, Pinsleep must travel through time and space to uncover the cabal that orchestrated the couple’s arrival, a secret organization that threatens to rip the fabric of reality apart.
House of Cabal: Eden is the first installment of an epic work of contemporary fantasy and horror, delving into the dark heart of human identity and occult faith.
I’ve been trying to figure out the cover of my next book and this is what I’ve come up with. Any thoughts?